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Old 04-16-04, 02:57 PM   #7
Shadows edge
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Yo.. that was actually a *really* tight verse Da Solution, *much* better than the other one I've seen.

Your opener was pretty damn tight.. I like what you were trying to do with the second bar, and it flowed pretty ok, decent punch and it was a personal, nice rhyme. The third bar was nothing special, the 4th was pretty nice, but then it kind of fell off. You really would have had this battle with a couple more good punches at the end and a more solid closer.

Enygma.. you came with the punches, nice wordplay with the names of crews, pretty good multis and shit.

v/Engyma, though a lot tighter than I would have thought.

Check out my battle against $$upreme once he drops.
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