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Old 04-16-04, 03:36 PM   #11
Shadows edge
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Aight.. I'm not going line by line because that would take too fucking long. So let's see... basically you both had similiar structure, pretty even flow, and you came hard with the punches. So basically it comes down to who was I feeling more, who had nicer wordlplay, better punches, etc.

I go with DP420... Like check this out from spul:


"Battlin’ only newbies… girl… you’re a wussy
You’re rhymes are as tight… as Paris Hilton’s pussy

And that’s very loose… jus to let your fine ass kno
Sleepin’ wit a different guy, each night, y’all are hoes"

Yo I got that second line in the first bar, the explenation is just superfluous, and then that punch in the second line is overused and just kinda weak.

I also liked DP's rhymes more, I felt the vocab a bit more... tight battle though.
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