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Old 04-16-04, 05:36 PM   #24
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Opener: DP..SPuL ur opener was very elementary wit the hoe concept...everyonbe uses that against DP so try to come up with something fresh...
Closer: Tie..SPuL's was a nice lil punch...DP's was a nice lil punch...so tie
Personals: SPuL...DP u didnt really have any personals...
Punches: DP...yours was longer..which means more room for punches...but SPuL u ahd some hot ones...just DP had more punches that were hard hitting...close category though...
Structure: SPuL...DP dont use "/"'s cuz they make u look like a newbie...
Multies: Tie...both had a lot of multis and they were hot...
Flow: SPuL...i jus felt SPuL's flow more...
Verse: Tie...both had hot verses so tie in that category..
WordPlay: DP...this is where DP showed her skill as being a vet...SPuL elevate in this category...
Vocab: DP...SPuL get out that dictionary haha...
DP...
Your pretty straight...jus keep elevatin cuz u r gettin betta...not really any advice i can give cuz u got the basics down...jus use some personals!!
SPuL...
Ok...keep elevatin on ur punches n personals...i suggest u go to tutorials and learn how to set urself up for a punch and how to land the punch...that shit helped me n im sure itll help you...nice multis in ur verse so keep usin those...keep elevatin kid cuz ur showin me alot of potenital each battle ur in...

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