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Old 04-16-04, 09:22 PM   #7
Oc6 The Caustic
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Posts: 184
From: Northern California
IP:

Man its a fuckin' battle, who else is she gonna battle? The majority is guys. It's good practice for her, Triple N is battling her because no other cats won't. Shit dawg.

Anyways:

missfiyagurl - Your structure was not as solid, but your wordplay I thought was good. Need some more personly's and multi's in there. Your flow wasn't as good as Triple N's, but you had an idea going.
Best Line: "Now he think he nuts, catch this lunatic
Ain’t a nigga but I cut, thrown measures ‘be legitimate" Nice line. Your ending could of been stronger also.

Triple N- Good structure and you have the tendecy to open up very powerful, always a check. You had nice Peronly's in there too and I was feelin' all of ya punches.
Best Line: "So, let me give your sorry ass some tips
My sound's platinum, yours is similar to when a CD skips"
You ended humorous and good.

Vote: Triple N

way to step up girl and battle good challengers, it only hepls ya.
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