Aight check it.

street, I wasn't digging your flow or structure at all. It's kinda clumpy when you got different number of lines in each mini verse, and your got no multis within the lines to help out the flow. Also, your rhymes were kinad weak in pleaces. What I would do is take some of those multiple rhymes you got and put them into one line, make it flow nicer and adds a little spice to your verse.

Also gotta work on your punches man, I saw too few. You mostly talking about how good you are, but nothing was too creative and you only had like 2 direct punches.

See check this:

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I bet ya think ya shit look pretty when u think
Bet ya think ya shit looks pretty in ink
To tell u tha truth dawg....ya shit looks pretty extinct"

That's nice wordlplay, the flow is awesome the way you use repetition there, it has decent punch also. Best couple lines in the battle I think."

Theif, you gotta get more consistent though, some of your flow was off in places, and a bunch of your punches were weak. Your opener was played, and your closer was a little weak.

Both y'all got potential but need to elevate.

Hit back my battle against East Miles (link in sig).

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