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Old 04-16-04, 10:45 PM   #10
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Streetsweepa?" come on lets get serious.....
Leave ya body bloody like a fat bitches period

you had some decent punches black thief...but that one was the funniest/best in my oppinion....your flow was pretty good..nothin was too crammed...but a couple lines i read....the bars in the couplets didn't match up...so it took away from your flow...you didn't have any metas..no multies...and not many personals..PLUS....your rhyme kinda had that whole gangsta scene in it..maybe it was just me...but i'm not into that kinda stuff....now onto street sweeper

what u bitch haha i dont envy ur skill//
u love wood so much we call u "tha human mill"//

wasn't feelin that line at all street...to be honest...i wasn't feelin most of your verse...your punches wern't that great...but, you came with more personals, regardless of how good they were....so thats gonna win me over...this was kind of a weak battle..i agree...both of you need to elevate..you got madd potential..cause the flow is there...you just need to step out a little bit...my vote goes to sweepa
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