ok, its like this. when your writing your verse, try rapping it. now if you are like me, this might not help. at least try to read it with a bit of a beat... you can tell if it has flow. now its ok to gow out of flow occasionally, if you pack a moster punch or something. but pp2, you were going over a line, and doing just generic disses. that's not gonna fly.

mixed mc: your verse was far from tight, but you got this battle. for instance the line where you said "by the way your moms panties is blue" or whatever.. that was a weak line, it seemed like you somehow couldn't rhyme "2" (... few, through, crew, you, threw, do, due, stew...). it could have been a nice punch if you did something original with it...

both of y'all need to elevate.

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