Alright, tight battle, I almost don't wanna vote cuz sometimes when I read it it goes one way, but sometimes goes the other way. Aight check it.

classic: best single line: "You said i get dick ride votes, dick riders rep my name in they sig." Very good personal I thought, very trixy. Problem is, it didn't really flow or rhyme with the verse... sig and dead? Also, I don't like the "." at the end of each line because it tripped me up the first time you spilled over into the next line and i had paused... so i guess lose the periods. also, your closer is kinda whack, not really a great punch and how many times have i heard that last line? the flow was pretty good though, good use of multis early on and good job keeping that rhyme going for so long.

create: aight man, you had no originality in the first 7 lines of your verse. that CLASS SIC / LAST HIT was the closest you came to a real nice punch there... the rest flowed well and good use of vocab, but no originality. the closer though, totaly made your verse better... good rhyme, good flow, slightly more original, but better than classics.

anyway.. overall i think both of you could use more punches, and i differentiate punches from stuff like "i'm gonna kill you / beat you / trash you." i mean like disses... i think a verse is pointless if it doesnt have 2 or 3.. and y'all really didn't bring it. you had the vocab, the flow, structure... but don't forget the punches people.

anway... like i said, very tight battle... v/ creative though i could seriously vote differently tomorrow... :shrug:

hit up my battles with an honest vote. peace.

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