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Old 04-17-04, 02:28 AM   #7
Triple_N
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ah'ight this was a decent battle..you both dropped hard an came wit dat shit, ah'ight...Black u had good punches, and good flow, but no multies, personals,or wordplay, but a solid verse wit decent vocab, u need to elevate son

Fatal...you didn't really have any punches cuz ya setups were messed up, let me explain
I Leave This Boy Bruised Black And Blue.|
Finally You Posted But Like A Library Ya Post Was Overdue..|
The first line(set up) has nothing to do wit the punchline(2nd line)
but you had good flow an good vocab, no multies, or wordplay, kinda the same as black, keep elevatin' son
Punches: black
Personal: tie
Wordplay: tie
Flow: tie
opener: tie
closer: tie
Vote: black, no disrespect fatal
holla back
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119204
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