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Old 04-17-04, 02:44 AM   #10
FlowIntelligent.
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aiight black u came aiight i think u coulda done better wasnt much to ya verse

quotable line

"Fatal lyrics, or self inflicted wounds//
fuck killin u son...I'll shove ya back into tha womb.....a bloody tomb"
^^ that was a nice closer and probably ya best line..i think u could have done better tho not many personals/punches no multis structure lacked sometimes...

fatal came nice too i would have expected more from you in this battle but u was still nice...

quotable line

"He Askin In Front Lines Can I Come Out And Play.|
And The Only Trigger He Pulled Was A Bottle Of Cleaning Spray"

^^ haha nice bar feelin it..u had a couple good multis some nice wordplay couple punches/personals.. all in all nice battle

vote : fatal lyrikzz
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