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Old 04-17-04, 02:53 PM   #9
PoLiFicK
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IP:

check it nice battle by both peeps both got off 2 some nice start both came hard check it

spul-u had a nice flow wit some hott punches good ass personals but on 1 junk u used hoe like twice so u couldve got creative wit dat but on da other hand nice drop

disaster-u had a descent drop yo shit was consistant all the way thru wit some punches nice vocab along the way some personals

spul:

bestline-At not following rules… you are definitely the master
I’ll rip you into 420 pieces, and turn you into a disaster

^^^^ wheeew hot way 2 kill her man u used her username against her in a hot way

worsteline-irl, I’m not one to be fucked wit. I be 8-2, yo
The crowd be lovin’ me… while they be booin’ you, hoe

^^^^^ 2 simple couldve got creative on dat

disaster-

bestline-You Talk Out Your A$$ Your 'Verbal-Disability-Spews',/
The Talent You Think You Got Im Sure You Breathe Through Ur 'A$$-Too',/

^^^^^ dat was tight feelin dat lady

worsteline-I'll Chop You Down To Size, You Embody The 'Word-Nerd',/
I'm The Lyrcally Un-Balanced, Bitch I Got Respect 'Nigga-Word',/

sounds more like of a freestyle more than a battle....

spul-

punches-9/10
vocab-8.5/10
personals-9/10
structure-10/10
open-9/10
end-9.5/10
overall-9.2/10

disaster-
punches-9/10
vocab-8.2/10
personals-9/10
structure-10/10
open-8.9/10
end-9.3/10
overall-9/10

winner spul
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