Hmm.. very tight battle. Creative.. I expected more.. you've been slacking lateley I think. The first line was pretty nice, but the flow wasn't great (too long). the second bar was just kinda weak, the second line especially could have been better. the third bar was definetely nice, also a good rhyme. the massacre line was nice, but then the next line was worded kinda poorly. the closer is kinda played, but still pretty decent.

franchiZe: yo, much better than the verse you spit against me. your first four lines were still really weak, just filler, not really much of a personal man. your next couple bars were pretty nice, but the last bar of that first part was really nice, i think your best one. very nice rhyme. your next 3 bars all flowed nicely, and you had good vocab throughout, but i didnt really see any nice punches. so basically, get a couple more multis, but work on da punches. you got too much filler, and too much "i'ma kill you" stuff, which is good but you have to have some punches i think.

v/ creative but tight battle.

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