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Old 04-17-04, 03:15 PM   #8
Shadows edge
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aight its like this. black thief definetely took it for punches, especially personals.

"you aint on my level you cant pimp this
I'm cheating....I'm rappin against a nigga from tha Special Olympics
Flow-Intelligent more like Flow-Irrelevant
tryin to spit polished diamonds...but his flow more like dust and sediment"

best punches in the whole battle, i think right there. the only problem is that you can see above, black you gotta work on your flow. both of you gotta work on rhyming too, but black you were more off on flow, structure, rhyming, multis and so on.

basically, you had the punches but FI had enough punches and much better technique to overcome. like this:

"
contest with flow? your efforts are low your chest'll go with stiffened blows//
dismissing foes with sickened shows to leave you froze and twitching hoe//"

nice mutli an pretty decent bar as well.. get more of that thief.

v/ flow

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