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Old 04-17-04, 03:30 PM   #30
Shadows edge
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hey yo I got a 1600 on my SATs and nobody cares because it doesn't matter, so how about less trash talking by everyone.

its like this. East: Your battles are weak as fuck. Your flow is really poor, the split line deal doesn't work at all, your lines don't really rhyme and your punches are all played and not original at all. you have to work on your vocab, multis, flow and get creative. also, get some personal punches in there, instead of just talking about your guns and what not.

check this, by JPoll:

"First off east miles, you can't kill me cause we're both online,
If you're so hard why u in front of ur comp, you should be commitin a crime,

It's friday night n ur a g?, if u where u wouldn't be text fightin,
I'm wrecking you as hard as holyfield did tyson, but you keep bittin,"

see that shit, he got a personal in there and straight up punches, nice wordplay and everything. not a perfect verse, but he easily took this battle.

East Miles, evelate.

hit back my battles, honest votes and well explained votes only.
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