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Old 04-17-04, 03:38 PM   #12
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If thats what you thought
 
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From: I.Q. of a Genius
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shadow, no multies, personals werent there or i jus didnt see them, vocab was poor, u had a few punches, this was sort of basic, you kind of talked about yourself more then your opponent what u need to work on is lyrical content, wordplay and personals

phat mic, your vocab was there its obvious like the ones above voting dont understand it,,,cuz i know what a marquee is. geez herbish voters, but uh punches were fair. a lot of three or two syllable words rhyming , no simple shit. you had personals. no multies. what u need to work on is stronger punches, and get your flow together, it was okay but a little off. and yall both need to elevate so take my advice and use it...

v/ phat mic
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