duke: good verse, vocab was aight, fair, but punches werent that hard ...what made your verse good was the personals, great job on u. wha tu need to work on is structure , wordplay and stronger punches

spul: great verse, vocab was okay but the creativity you bring was amazing. punches were a little harder then duke's but you were a little less on the personals.....but what u need to work on is ...structure...it was okay but it could of been better.

v/spul

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