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Alright.. didn't say no crew votes, so I'll drop an honest vote, if you wanna DQ it though that's cool. Both of your verses were really nice, I liked how both of you ended it with the narrator dying. Personally though, I like LI verse a bit more.. Killa it seems like you kinda new to Topical, I didn't feel like your flow matched the story telling nature of the verse as much as LI's. You also jumped around a bit more than LI, like check your first stanza:
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Blood on my shirt as my homeboi lays dead on the floor/
reloading my nine,i knew it was time to settle the score/
Called up my homeboi J told him to meet me infront of the store/
5 of my boyz dead in 1 week,I can't take this anymore/
Blastin bullets in the sky as the empty clips drop to the floor/
I realized my whole life is filled with drugs,violence and gore/
Wrote a note on my crew door,its time for STREET WARZ/"
The "drugs, violence and gore" line seems kinda out of place, like the narrator has this realization and then... nothing.
Like I said though, sick verses from both of you, much respect for even doing a topical, but I felt like LI really painted a story that was kinda more realistic and I was feeling it more.
v/LI
Hit up my battles, honest and explained votes only.
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