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Old 04-17-04, 06:08 PM   #19
sicker_than_HIV
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truth-you had a lot of good punchlines, but i thought you tried to be too complicated sometimes, and that took away from your flow...you used a lot of big words, but most of them didn't really make sense with eachother, i th9ink you tried to hard on this battle instead of just let it flow...mny favorite line from you was ....

Solar eclipse depraved him of the life givin light
In fights I erase everything livin in sight


wild fire flipped that on you tho, with this

you must of seen your reflection before you looked in my direction because now your non existant//

and he had a bunch of other good lines, a lot of multies, some were shaky but overall i think he used them well, he also used a decent vocabulary, and it all made sens, this vote goes to wild fire