Out-Spoken
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I'll give you some food for thought.//
You think you're gangsta because of all the " Clas sic" shoes you brought?!!//
i liked that line and this line...
In this battle I'm gonna shine.... Take your time...N evaluate my rymes.... Because its gonna take all of your 21 wins combined.... to even come up with a respectable line//
those were both good personals...and that last you had good use of multies...i wasn't really feelin the rest of the verse tho..it seemed like it was mostly filler...
now onto you....accomp...you had some good lines..here are the ones i liked...mold kids with verbal skills, thats why east becomes my hand-made-fan.../
wit a knife at hand, leave him wit so many cuts he could sponsor band-aid-brand.../
that was the best one in my oppinion...okay use of multies...okay personal...and good punch...over all your verse was decent...i thought it flowed better than than east miles....but...i really dont like a whole lotta gangsta talk...you both had kinda violent verses..and thats cool if you keep it minimal...accomp...you didn't...sorry...east gets my vote...to be honest...i think you both need to elevate...but maybe this just wasn't a good battle for either of you
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Seek & Destroy
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