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IP:
reason nobody voting is because they're sick of you free posting on their battles without dropping votes.
that said, check it.. tight battle. east, you definetely elevated *a lot* since your other battles.
the same lines wildfire quoted, those were very good, best two bars of the battle i think, brought the hard punches and personals. the problem was that the rest of your verse still had problems with flow, structure, and really had no good punches. concentrate on getting more quality punches, less filler.
accomp, pretty ok verse, certainly not the best i've seen from you. the first couple bars were pretty bad, but your last 5 were all really good. you had basically the same personal through most of them.. "fake thug", but you did it well in each line you dropped it. the play on his name was a good punch even though the flow wasn't great. the closer was mediocre, but those other bars and the consistency were enough for accomp to take the battle.
hit back on my battles, honest and explained votes only.
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