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Old 04-17-04, 06:52 PM   #17
Cythis
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Good attempt, but that sucked- I liked one line out of both verses

Enigma – your name says it all, your punches had me burning rubber
Flow – ruined becuz of strange rhyming, its fucken hard to read
Punches – very immature, untrained
Personals – the Squared line was ok, could improve
Meti’s – nice but don make sense
All and all – very weak drop- 3/10

Best line
“He's Sending Flares, in need of help......... Can't Be Compared
First 'round' wit E, Da Solution........... this MC's Squared”

Da solution – well in this case you were like toilet paper – for that crap
Flow – nice could improve
Punches – yeah sure, they were all over the show, but too weak
Personals – man I fucken love that one ( although im White)
“White guys rule okay keep dreaming/I''L DO THIS NEIGHBORLY
Favor me/U hav'nt ruled a goddamn thing since tha time of slavery”
Meti’s – well done
All and all – very good drop, I expect that you will do a lot better in ya next
Battle, if ya keep up punches like the slavery one, bit racist but fucken well thought up, for a raw drop (I hope)- 6/10

Vote : Da solution