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Old 04-17-04, 11:41 PM   #8
Triple_N
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This was a one sided battle....east miles ya verse needed alot of work, undeveloped punches, no personals, wordplay, basic vocab, bad flow, an amaetuer structure, you really nedd to elevate
Shadow...good verse ya highlights was ya multies and vocab usage, punches coulda been stronger, nice flow, solid structure, a little wordplay, not many personals...but solid verse u get my vote
Vote: Shadow
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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119667
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