Aight.. truthfully I've seen better from both of you.

Trip: Aight.. that KKK/Foxworthy line was pretty decent, but I wasn't feeling much else from the beggining of your verse. The tweezers punch is pretty solid, even if slightly overplayed, but you gotta work on your flow and use a better set up for it I think to make it more compact and hit harder.. the way it is the set up is not really relevent and the line is a bit stretched. The next bars were pretty solid.. I like the way you actually used a setup line for the "whipe yourself" punch, though you stil could have made it more compact, like cut out that "hair down the middle of your face" part or something. I didn't like your second to last line.. a catfight means it was *two* bitches man... but your last line was a nice closer.

enygma: You opened with what I think was your best punch of the battle, and the only real good personal in the battle. After that, you had some ok punches and some whack lines.. like why call his rhymes "sweet ass"? You had an ok aprentice diss there.. but you could have used a better setup, like the line were you called him a rookie. Would have made it hit harder I think. The last two bars were pretty ok, though your closing line was somewhat weak.

Aight, so because both of you had basically equal punches, some good and some bad, I gotta go with verse had better flow and technique, and I go with enygma. TripN, you had some nice multis at the end but they were lacking for the most part considering how long your lines were.. and some just didn't flow too well ("knockers"/"dockers" bar for instance). engyma, your flow wasn't the best I've seen but it was pretty compact, but you gotta get the multis in there, work on vocab and the such.

Anyway, tight battle, both of you guys work on multis, vocab and consistency I guess.

Peace.

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