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Old 04-18-04, 12:48 AM   #4
Oc6 The Caustic
Flyweight
 
Posts: 184
From: Northern California
My Breakdown

IP:

Here it is:

Triple N- Everysingle fuckin' time!:

This bitch nigga stay talkin' bout how niggas he been through//
He nothin' more than a 2 bit faggot that see's more dick than condoms do//

Your the only person I know on this site that opens a battle so hard and personal. It sets the tone off and makes thr challenger worried. I liked your flow a lot, you had nice hard personly's and punches. Your structure was strong also. Great sense of wordplay.

Kl!K- Try to start off harder then you did. Your flow was a little shaky, you had too many misplaced words that threw half of your rhymes off and made your flow weak. You had good punches but Triple N had better personly's then you. Try to make your structure stronger and work on your rhyme scheme a lil' bit.

Vite- Triple N.
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