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Old 04-18-04, 03:17 AM   #1
JPoll
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yo pretty good battle guys...good shit...i'm breaking it down line by line cause i don't know who won yet...it was tight

okay first off with franchize's verse


yo check it heres my blind ass spit

U wanted me so bad, I’m putting u at tha front of tha queue//
I’m gonna ‘classically’ annihilate u in front of ure whole crew//
7 decent, pretty good punch but not great
I’m tha real franchiZe, so I hope u don’t try the Houston Rocket//
Cuz I put a gun up to that franchise and got tha rocket to cock-it//
6 wha? wha?...good wording...not a ton of meaning though
My spit’ll blow u up makin u look like tha Michelin man//
U beatin me, a niggaz got more chance of joinin tha Ku Klux Klan//
4 hmm...8th mile...heard it alot on this site...but it's all good
If this were tha rap leagues I’d be spittin with tha pro’s//
I’m gonna smash ure winning record as if I was Pete Rose//
9 tight...pete rose...tha's a tight line man
Ure ass cudnt beat me even with a rap encyclopedia//
Cuz my spits are explosive they create shockwaves like macromedia//
9 tight closer man...good job...nice finish
(Macromedia created the Shockwave application)


and now for classic

Okay you the franchize of what? Are u a business organization
My name is Classic which means I'm the maker of your creation
8 super nice...
I will lyrically defeat you, and you will consider permanant vacation
So u can never battle Class Sic again for the remainder of your duration
7 decent...not worded strongly though
You the reason why Classic and franchize dont have a fuckin relation
And stop coming with flirtatious comments cuz u bringing some admiration
6 wha? wha? nice usage of words but wha?
If the time exceeds I'll make sure you get banned for posting text again
I'll turn the franchize to history, place him in the records of old testament
7 pretty good...not a great concept though
Your next to get sent to me, placed in my battle penitentiary
Look how i did u with ease, You'll be a free agent for centuries
8 nice closer smooth finish...tight verse

haha i still don't know who won...it was tight

now for the additions...
franchize....7+6+4+9+9=35
Daclassic....8+7+6+7+8=36


wow that was tight....almost a draw...but it goes to Da classic

respect to both emcees for tight verses...good job guys