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Old 04-18-04, 09:41 AM   #11
iamthatdude87
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overall weak battle...but ill break it down like this
Notorious 1/10 u need to work on it
u need to elavate dude!com on the rules say 10 lines u only spit 8
u need to work on ur punches.no multies,metas,or wordplay if ur gonna diss someone
why u gonna call him a wimp or say u dont have any money u gotta come up wit disses
that are not so weak.
Best line=None

Gkillaz 5/10
even though this was one of ur weakest battles im prety sure u could of did better but anyways u did better in punches,disses and flow u could of did better on wordplay
but i didnt see n e multies or metas

Best line=Should this guy be rappin' the answer is 'NoNoNo'//
How you gun be Notorious when you cant even flow//


vote for my battle wit potentialy fatal