A'ight...this battle was pretty weak...both of you need to elevate...
Ecko...things got better as they went along. Your punches were pretty weak at the start. but they got better. Don't use gay jokes: they're played and stupid. Overall, your verse was a'ight...need to werk on structure and flow...vocab was good, but could be better...
5/10
Fatal...you had some nice shit in there, but mostly everything needs elevation...its not like it was a horrible verse, but you just need to work on your structure...don't use capitals for battles. It amkes them ahrd to read. You also need to work on a consistent flow...some lines had three or four ryhmes, and others only had two. Werk on that. Overall, your verse was decent...
4/10
Vote- Ecko
No hate...hit this up honestly...
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119336