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Old 04-18-04, 01:18 PM   #12
xXxMaztamindxXx
Banned: Cheating
 
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iight hereswut i think
streetsweepa

flow 6/10
rhymes 7/10
punches 7/10
structure/style 8/10
overall 7.5/10
ur best line-yo bitch u better quit with the attitude//
bitch u should show me gratitude//
u cant elevate high enough to get on my lattitude//
even if i gave u a fucking ladder dude//

wulf

flow 4/10
rhymes 6/10
punches 7/10
structure/style 5/10
overall 5.5/10
ur best line-while its boilin, With a face full of welts, get your mom to nurse it
Cuz your verse isn't written in brail, meaning its not felt
(but u gotta get ur shyt tighta homie ur shyt didnt even rhyme na mean keep workin on it)