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Old 04-18-04, 02:46 PM   #9
Shadows edge
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From: Urbana
IP:

Alright.. tight battle..

LI:

Punches: 25/35
You had some nice personals, playing on the fact that he PM you and he's a newbie, but overall you weren't that hard hitting. you get the points mostly for personal and for a pretty decent close.

Creativity/Originality: 20/25
You had a nice spin on the Jackson diss, but its still kind played.. had the rhymes blow = prostitute thing, also kinda played, get the creativity mostly for the original stuff at the start of your verse. At least all your rhymes were pretty new, so props there.

Flow: 13/15
You had lines that were as long as 1.5 regular lines, but you still made it flow pretty nice with the multis.

Vocab/Wordlplay: 3/10
I didn't see anything....

Multis: 5/5
You had them.

How it ties in..: 8/10
Basically you used the multis to help your flow and make your lines not as stretched out, but you had no nice vocab to tie in so only 8/10.

Total: 74/100. Not the best I've seen you spit...

K Merks:

Punches: 28/35
Pretty tight, extra props for having a personal and a solid open and close. Wasn't feeling the Pinto line *at all* though, and that was a whole wasted bar.

Creative: 22/25
Pretty original spin on the premature line, pretty original throughout, nothing was overly played, but most of it wasn't crazy creative.

Flow: 13/15
Pretty solid.

Vocab/wordplay: 5/10
Um.. you had that ketchup thing, that was basically it.

Multis: 0/5
You had none.

How it all ties in: 5/10
The problem is that when you were original, your punches suffered. That pinto/shinto shit was just a crap punch and let the air out of your verse when it hit. Props for mixing in the wordplay into a pretty solid punch with the ketchup though.

Total: 73/100 nice spit for a newb.

Jesus... that's about as close it gets... vote to LI but *very tight*
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