View Single Post
Old 04-18-04, 03:33 PM   #12
PoLiFicK
..Intelligent Hoodlum..
 
PoLiFicK's Avatar
 
Posts: 1,669
From: bedrock
IP:

spit 2 dis by a mile
spit u had some nice structure nice vocab and some tight punches homie


bestline-shyte boi u an't gotta clue\\
imma blow ur loss record up larger than micheal jackson rapein u\\

^^ way 2 add 2 insults

worsteline-didnt have 1 feelin yo shit pimp

187- i likeed yo flow but it was way 2 short
u had some tight punches yo self wit good ass structure

bestline-wheres the fire, all u do's cough up smoke
becoz ure buggin me, ill squash u like a cock-er-roach

^^ nice start

worsteline-u cant be trying to win kid, learn tha ropes first
im sure style aint ever bin did coz

spit-
punches-7/10
flow-8/10
vocab-7/10
structure-8/10
personals-9/10
open-9/10
end-10/10
overall-8/10

187-
punches-7/10
flow-7/10
vocab-7/10
structure-9/10
personals-9/10
open-9/10
end-7/10

winner-spit
__________________
Send a message via AIM to PoLiFicK