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Old 04-18-04, 05:52 PM   #7
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i think you both coulda came better....but here is my oppinion

bestline was in fact this........
-shyte boi u an't gotta clue\\
imma blow ur loss record up larger than micheal jackson rapein u\\

even tho that was a good line....in this battle....you can only add 1 loss to his record...so in the way you used it..it didn't really make sense..but it could of...so i had a lot of potential...which is more than that other dudes evrse had

187....i did not like your verse at all...honestly...

bestline-wheres the fire, all u do's cough up smoke
becoz ure buggin me, ill squash u like a cock-er-roach

....this line was your best..the first bar about coughin up smoke was okay...but the cockerroach thing was really, really played out

worstline - the rest of the verse...you need to elevate..right now..you suck..but you have potential cause the flow was there..just practice more

my vote....fire
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