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Old 04-18-04, 06:23 PM   #13
Rising Sun
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THE SINNISTER
flow is tight, but no literary devices.
Good multies and decent vocab, but not any good punchlines, and most are played out.

LOT
He took this one for sure. His flow was tighter, amazing punches, and godo multies. And killed the sinister in the vocab field. Here is his good punches.

Punches:
-Go ahead and spit first kid, your punches wont hit,
you couldn't spit a straight line if you dropped on a grid_~

-use your own blood to write my name on you chest
So when i push in the skin you'll know in ya heart whos the best
its sad that text freestyling is gonna be this kids career crest_~

-I'll have you hearing 'guns clap' like an 'applauding audience of 9 milli's'_~

-Cause your spirit in rap game like weeds the way they grow,
and hip hops lawnkeeper is here to mow_~
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