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Old 04-18-04, 07:50 PM   #14
Afterword
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yo both came off aight
mike 12 had the advantage here with the better punches, wordplay and word choice in my view. his lines were more precise, and creative
"Yo I hop over railroads like your tracks-been-skipped
You like a prisoner’s asshole cause you’ve just-been-ripped"

phat mic was koo but just needs to elevate the diction a lil bit, and some harder punches and personals wpoldnt hurt

hit my battles yall
i just call it how i c it
peace
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