aight heres some advice...#1 you should set up your verse in a way that distinguishes one line from the next..#2 its much easier to write on a topic that is thought out than just making up random things that don't even fit the purpose of a verse..#3 self promotion is good as long as your clear about what your braggin about and your not just talkin out your a$$ with lines that make you seem elementary..anyways keep writing..improve and elevate..one

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