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Old 04-18-04, 09:06 PM   #21
PoLiFicK
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From: bedrock
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it was a real nice battle fellaz

check it i liked both of yalls vocab yall came strong on dat and personals LI ate dat up good punches was there and nice structure

LI
bestline-Splittin you rhymes apart...you were done from the very start...
Rappin is a given gift of art...jus dont get why herbs like u wanna take part...

u had a good jump start u got at him early i liked dat

worsteline-none here u put it all right playa

karl-

bestline-Think i'm worried? Nah, my hands are calm and steady,
Cause like premature ejaculate - you spit before ready.

^^^ another good open i liked da starts

wosrsteline-none here u had it all on target

LI
pucnhes-9/10
flow-9/10
structure-8.7/10
personals-10/10
open-10/10
close-9/10
overall-9.2/10

karl

pucnhes-9/10
flow-9/10
structure-8.7/10
personals-8/10
open-10/10
close-9/10
overall-9.0/10

more personals u wouldve had it kiddd

good battle winner LI
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