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Old 04-18-04, 09:25 PM   #15
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FIRST BATTLE
Choppa - you had an ok flow...stretched lines at times but for the most part ur flow was good....u had sum nice punches and sum decent ones....no really horrible ones....you didnt really have ne multis....but a nice verse overall

Best Line/Bar...
betta off goin 2 hiphoptalk and making a problem......
then after they answer they trip on yo wins column.....

Worst Line/Bar...
5 votes easly took,have afterspeechless and shook,he prolly still wont win a battle if stevie wonder decided 2 take a look.......

Afterword - u had good multis...punches were aight....flow was off b/c of stretched lines....nice lil personal in there...actually a couple....decent verse overall...

Best Line/Bar...
yo thanx a lot for stopin in, I know u are very busy making the band on MTV
but seriously stop wathin them, make a stand, and get ur own IDENTITY

Worst Line/Bar...
im not even an impressive battle rapper, but i manage wit raw talent
u an unconvincing actor-rapper thats over-dressing like tossin a salad

SECOND BATTLE
Afterword - this verse was alot better than your first....u had good multi's...hard hitting punches....and a nice flow....

Best Line/Bar...
hot lines no doubt you speak a few, but i doubt that u created'em
you bite from guys u listen too, misconscrue their view and update'em

Worst Line/Bar...
NONE

Choppa - good sustainment in this verse...started off well...finished off well...strong punches....a lil bit messed up flow in the middle....ok multis....nice verse....

Best Line/Bar...
shouldnt even need a verse his words a be my best diss.......
im goin on 10-2 y dis bitch goin still be winliss.......

Worst Line/Bar...
comin wit wack lyrics ill slit his throat,a deaf person a tell AFTER i dont wanna hear his WORDS nomo.....
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