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Old 04-18-04, 09:48 PM   #16
Wulf
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Spitfire...i've never seen a battle verse that long..and its uncalled for

FLOW: DeNounced had this one easy, it was a lil more complex then yours and well he kept a struture through out...Spit your flow was also on point but it got played out because of the lack of complexity

Vocab: I'd give this one to Spit he looked in his dictionary a lil more nuff said

Punchs: great punchs on both parties but what really hurt spit was the fact that he didn't keep his punchs hard through out his whole verse he came strong but die fast

This Controversy your rhymes cant-hurt-me,you spit fire?,chea...whos chain are you jerking-
This kids an easy merking,try and flip the scripts but your burning,why'd your mom do it...you werent worth-birthing-

^heh

Overall: i'm giveing this one to DeNounced, next time spit if your going to spit so many bars make sure they carry the fire all the way through with out so many fuller lines...i think thats what hurtcha the most in this battle

VOTE DeNounced

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