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Old 04-18-04, 10:28 PM   #2
Triple_N
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Good shit y'all...Bojangler u got alot ofpraticing to do before you battle again, ya verse made no sense, lacked punches, personals, multies, vocab, wordplay, your verse showed your new to rap just keep working at it an you'll get there.

Oc6...good verse, you kinda fed off his verse but still a good verse nonetheless, you had good punches, work on structure, decent multies, a few personals, and a good opener, decent closer, no wordplay, but good vocab, nice drop stay up
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