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Old 04-18-04, 10:51 PM   #1
Oc6 The Caustic
Flyweight
 
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From: Northern California
My Breakdown

IP:

Yo:

Opener: This most defintley goes to Sten. Cell. That line was the illest of the battle:
Flow/Structure: I give this to Triple N. Sten, your structure wasn't as strong as Triple N's, you kept falling off towards the end of your flow.
Vocab/Wordplay: This goes to Sten, he intertwined so many words together that made most of his lines good. Triple N, yours was decent, but Sten. most def. has this topic covered.
Punches: This goes to Triple N. You had nice hard hits and this is what your known for, all of your punches were good and hard. Sten. Your punches got weaker as your verse went down, try to keep on top with that.
Multi's: I give this to Triple N, Sten, you had Multi's but Triple N has a good perspective on them and your Multi's didn't seem as strong. Try to work on that.

Triple N, you barley got this one. I have seen you way better then this.
Sten Cell, try to work on punches and Multi's. Your structure seems good.

Vote- Triple N good battle.
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