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Old 04-18-04, 11:38 PM   #9
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From: Danville,Va...Ya Know!!!
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Both rappers had kinda plain verses,i been doin this for awhile so what catches my eye is Wordplay,Personals and Metaphores and ya'll didnt use them!Quick punch u need to brighten ya vocab ya verse was ok but punches came pretty weak!

Killah ya flow was nice but u didnt come at this cat hard like u should!Focus on makin hard ass punches!!!

Best Lines!
-Killah-scorchin' and burnin' your verse,blessin' you with this curse.../
its the 18th of april,smack you back to the first,carry you away in a herse.../

-Quick-The only flow u leak out is the jizz ur dick spills
U think u can beat me? Kids heres an example of why crack kills….

Vote=Killah............he just came way harder yo!!!
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