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Old 04-19-04, 09:59 AM   #12
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Here's how I saw it, line by line........

I Leave This Boy Bruised Black And Blue.|
Finally You Posted But Like A Library Ya Post Was Overdue..|
Needs to be reworded.....shakey start
Inflicting Wounds The Only Thing You Inflict Is Cancer And Diabetes.|
Next Time I Shouldnt Battle Him Cause He Causin Diseases.|
Can't really inflict diabetes........
He Askin In Front Lines Can I Come Out And Play.|
And The Only Trigger He Pulled Was A Bottle Of Cleaning Spray.|
Creative......
What Makes Him Have Confidence He Cant Even Spell.|
He Had A CORDLESS Phone But Shit Still He FELL.|
I just don't get it, maybe I'm readin it wrong
Last Line Have A Nice Day While I Inflict Venom In Ya Skin.|
He Tangled Like A ~Violin~ Within His Brain He Cant ~WIN~
Makes no sense......



aiight is this another battle or just another roast//
just another reason why people shit on on tha West Coast//
Nice personal......
And if you think you really gonna win son...who taught ya//
I'll leave cats at tha crime scene like "who shot ya?"//
Ehh.......Could be worded better
Another cat from Cali who thiink he "hella" hot//
but u can get popped too...so u can be just like Pac//
Not bad
cause California may know how to party///
but in tha dirty dirty all we do is ride wit shottys//
Not really a punch......
Fatal lyrics, or self inflicted wounds//
fuck killin u son...I'll shove ya back into tha womb.....a bloody tomb...RIP
Nice Closer........Best punch in the battle

Overall this was a one sided battle. Black thief came with a lot more creativity wit his punches. I feel that punches are what wins battles so I pretty much vote for whoever had the best punches. I'll tell ya about all the other stuff too though. Niether had any multis or good structure. Wordplay was minimal from both.

Best Line.........
Fatal lyrics, or self inflicted wounds//
fuck killin u son...I'll shove ya back into tha womb.....a bloody tomb...RIP
^Black Thief

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