FRANCHISE- EXCELLENT FLOW. THE VOCABULARY WAS GOOD. I DONT THINK YOU WERE REALLY PUTTING EFFORT INTO IT UNTILL THE FOURTH LINE AND THERE AFTER. IF YOU START LIKE YOU FINISHED THERE IS HIGHER POTENTIAL FOR YOU!

CREATIVITIE-NICE FLOW. YOU NEED MORE FIERCE PUNCHES. IT SOUNDED LIKE YOU WERE ON THE DEFENSE INSTEAD OF THE OFFENSE. STILL GOOD THOUGH.