Structure was wack, flow got better during the end, and yours was too long, like too many fillers. Vocab was weaker than Wulfs, and no many multies and personals. Although u had better punches.
Didn’t flow much, vocab is sick, punches are ok, and multies are good, there are no personals.
This is hard but immo give it to….
Streetsweepa
No hate, good job