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Old 04-19-04, 02:39 PM   #7
M&rk
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mike i was only feelin this one line
But this Mike don’t bite, I type-rhymes making mikes-shine
You must be claustrophobic, the way you fear my “tight-rhymes”//4
other guy had more and more complex, and rhymes wit multies.

that was the best in the battle but the other guy had more, if u had another one like that idda given it too u. both of u on the right path wit them punches, but ya'll still need to elevate by puttin in more and better ones.

oh and this line
I have no love battling chumps, Imo whip-this-whoosy//
You must be a virgin to this rap game cause I just ripped-this-pussy//2
~~~held it agianst u cuz its way too played
vote- the voice

get a vote on my battles in my signiture. preferably saint cuz its bout closed out
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