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Old 04-19-04, 02:57 PM   #30
Da Vinci
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Well Denouced takes this one, I didn't really expect to read a novel before I clicked to vote on this shit but oh well.

Spitfire I really was not a fan of every line startin with "you ......."
EX.

yo ass is wacker than dirt,so wack when i tell a joke to yah it seems to hurt\\
i wonder why i must be poping E pills,shyte u on da otha hand need"em so

ur drivin us as in da world all crazy,yo shyte is way outa proportion shyte u a bytch worser than 2 month yr old baby\\

you sesame street fucka gayer than bigg bird,i try to spell new things out to yah in tha dictionary but u didn't understand the words\\

u like premature ejeculation ,always says things at the wrong tyme an i burn it in replacement//
u a minor crackhead waitin 4sum rock,yo life is da wait yah mind it serves then u go outta stock//
you a run 4 da worlds money,be dat first dumass fool on network televison to fuck an bunny//

try to mix it up,

Denounced had better flow, and punches, I wasn't really feel'n spit's, it was to the point. Spit's was way to long, there are bar limits for a reason.

u straight up like jwanna-man don't know what sex u wanna be,1st u wanted
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