Alright I Appriciate Those' Who Wish Me Luck! Examples; LoT, SPuL, Kuniva, CreaTiviTie, & Last But Not Least!! Enygma!'.. Haha ... DAMN First Time Making A Crew Of My Own And Shit' You Know!!' .. Anyways' ... Let Me Get At This Shit!!!.. If You Disagree With Me In AnyWays.... 'Killah Bwoy Let Me Know!' Cause You Are The Leader After All Ah Ha' .. Im Just Backing You Up You Know!!' .....& L.I. I Do Hope Your Crew' Goes Well' Only WIsh You The Best Of Luck With That Shit You Know!'

Alright No-Bullshit!!!!

GKillaz05 - Your Shit Is ALright' ..!! Not Great! But 'Cool' You Know' .. You Could Work On 'WordPlay, Creativity, Rhyme Scheme, Vocab, & Multies' No Disrespect Im Just Giving You Advice.. To Improve And Get Better' Evelate Some' ..But You Do Have Some 'Potential' ... Get Back @ Me' Once You Think You Have Improved Some What' ..!! Alright!! - - -But For Now' Im Going To Have To Say' ... Your Out'!!

Ecko296 - You Could Use Some Serious Work Son' I Mean Not To Be Rude Or Crude Or Anything Of The Sort But First Off You Need To Work On Structure And Get That Shit Down Because' .. Once Your Structure Is Off That Throw's Your Whole Verse Off Balance' And You Don't Want That'!! Secondly, You Need To Evelate Kiid & Get On Some Kind Of Level!! Because Im Just Not Feeling Your Style- True Yes EveryBody Does Have There Own Style' ..!! But Yours Seems To Be A Bit Off Hand!!, Work On Multies, Structure, Flow, Verse, Wordplay, Efficientcy, Rhyme Scheme, Vocab, Punches, And Put Some Effort Into Your Rhyming Compatibility!!' .. Aiight . Im Going To Leave You With That!!' - - - But For Now' Im Going To Have To Say' ... Your Out'!!

Real Thorough - I Really Am Feeling Your Style.. & Your Rhyme Scheme No Doubt! I Would Say You Have Good Potential .. @ Getting Into This Crew' ..!! I Like Your WordPlay & Multies' ..!! That Verse You Dropped Was Dropping Decent Bar's.. With Nice Creativity & Proportion!!' .. I'm Going To Say You're In!! ..' If You Can Handle The Heat'!!!!

simulation - Again You Need to Work On Your Verse!! Youre Flow Was Weak And You Feel Short In Almost Every Aspect!! Of Each Category' ... Once You Evelate Get Back @ Me' ... But For Now' Im Going To Have To Say' ... Your Out'!!

C_R_E_A_M - As Much As I Like You'!! .. Im Going To Have To Say' You Need Some Serious Work Also!!!' ... NO Doubt Some Of Your Lines Feel Off Short Witch Indicated That You Could Evelate Some And Work On Your WordPlay & Vocab..!! I Wouldn't WOrry So Much About It Though EveryBody Starts At One Point Or Another!! .. EveryBody's On There Own Level .. & Has There Own Unique Style.. But Work On Your Verse.. And Get Back @ Me' .. But For Now' Im Going To Have To Say' ... Your Out'!!

TheSinnister: I Have No Problems' Nor Disrespect For You @ This Point But Continue' On.. And I Just Might!! - Recognize Who You Are Disrespecting' .. & Fucking With Playa' !!! - - - Straighten Up Your Act' !!!!!!!!!! If You Aint Got Nothing Posotive To Say See YourSelf Out Of This Thread!!!

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