Aight check it... DP has this one. Mad, you had 7 bars, and a couple were just terrible. The first... an ok intro I guess but saying a chick likes dickriding... is well.. not saying much. Your second bar just sounds silly.. "weiner" is something 2nd graders say. Your third bar was really your only good punch of the battle, nice wordplay. Then you call her cute, which is totally not relevent to the parametic line... try using a setup or something. THen you closed without a real punch. Weak verse overall.. gotta work on using set up lines and hitting with hard punches instead of just filler.

DP, your verse was also pretty weak... the Fred lines toward the end had some nice punches but I just felt like you were lacking early. The problem was almost every punch wrapped and it mest up the flow pretty bad, then you started stretching lines. As usual though, you had very nice original rhymes, and you did have more punches than MH, so you get the vote.

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