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New to RB
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IP:
your my first prority on top of my shit list/
no dick ridin i thought you loved that shit
(Not startin as much of a punch....and a bit played second half...but coo....okey opener...6/10)
you'll turn around and see me wit a meat cleaver/
but dont bite my style just bite my big weiner
(Okey this one is just plain shit...sorry but..its not a punch...more of a confesion you`re a big moron..2/10)
im like a magican and your one of my "tricks"/
you not a chick your a dude and you just got fixed
(You started good but again fucked in the next line...nice wordplay in first,....6/10)
your on a frozen pond walkin on thin ice/
ya hair so thin you gotta comb it wit rice
(This aint a punch....this is a madafakin poem....2/10)
i seen ya pic you kinda cute i'll admitt it/
bitch slapp you so hard you gonna need a parametic
(this one is tryin to be a punch...but still its patethic...3/10)
so if you would please merk me i'm fuckin beggin you/
talk about how im white cuz it would be the last thing you ever do
(Okey being sarcastic in the first line....but you fucked up the second one....4/10)
turn around samack you to the ground/
watch you go down what the fuck you got to say now
(Again a terrible closer.....this was real weak shit.....2/10)
Overall: 25 / 70
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Insecurity Is 'Japeto' When You Try To 'Be-Cool',/
I Can See Why You Get No Pussy, Beside Dick 'Making-You-Drool',/
(Okey somhow i dont understand this oppener....but still beats the shit out of Mad Hatters one...7/10)
When Cops Stop This Loser He 'Gets-Directions',/
To Leave The Hood, Pigs Usually Show 'Great-Affection',/
For Their Kind, That's Why You Always 'Answer-Questions',/
5.0 Blinks And You Drown In Your 'Own-Confessions',/
(To much poetic...and you dissin the cops...not him...5/10
U Aint Street Ur Just A Tony Hawk Fan A Parody Man Drugy a FuckingMistake,/
Your Hood Connections Are Up To Par With 'Justin-Timberlake',/
(Started out nice...went into good....finished as OK punch..7/10)
Boy Bands Pussy Can Never 'Cross-Over',/
And ACt Like Their Tough And Completely 'Gloss-Over',/
(Weak punch....no agression....not much of a multi....5/10)
The Fact That The Nerve You Hit Was Up In 'Fred-Sphincter',/
You Tongued Your Dog Like It Was Your 'Last-Dinner',/
(Liked this one....specially the second part...nasty shit...7/10)
Don't Be Ashamed You're Not The First To Come Out 'The-Closet',/
Fred Is Happy That You're His Official 'Sperm-Deposit',/
(Okey again a weak punch that lighthens up right at the end....5/10)
I Figured You Out I Told You To Be Yourself,/
This Drug Dealer Madd Hater Is Played, Is This A 'Cry-For-Help',/
(Coo....nothin much.....dont know why the drug dealer input... 5/10
Checcckity Checck Checck - - -
Daddy Didnt Give You A 'Perche-This-Week'?/
Is He Ashamed That His Son Looks Like A 'Total-Geek?',/
Blame Your Genetics Cause Physcology 'Completely-Reeks',/
Of A Coward Faking Toughness, You Could 'Never-Speak',/
(Dayum...this is where you got what i wanted.....spittin faya...nice worplay...punch is good....multi works for me......8/10
You're Just A Lonely Fan Madd Hatter Fuck That 'Thug-Image',/
You Crackers Swear Your Hip-Hop Yet Ya Never Ever 'Scrimmage',/
(Dont understand the ending....but a better finisher than Hatters...5/10)
Overall: 49 /90
Overall *: 38/70
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Mah wote: DP
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