Alright kl!k WTF Is Up With The - - - -- - - - After Most EverySingle Mother Fucking Got Damn Word!!! !!!!!!! What The Hell Is Up With That Shit Alright!!

First: Evelate
Second: Battle Against FreeStyler's That Aint Heated
Third: Quit With The Fuckin - -- - - - - - - After Every Single Got Damn Word
Fourth: You Could Use Some Work In Almost Every Aspect Of Each Category! Structure, Flow, Verse, Rhyme Scheme, WordPlay, Vocab, Creativity, Etc;

Alright This Battle Was Pretty One Sided!! Im Going To Have To Side With Triple_N On This One Though!! Checck It

This bitch nigga stay talkin' bout how niggas he been through//
He nothin' more than a 2 bit faggot that see's more dick than condoms do//


^Nice PunchLine!!!!!! 9/10

I look at you wit disgust, cuz u must quit rhymin', u spit so much bullshit that it dried an crust//
I mean trust, if you continue pump ya self up wit more hot air u gon' spontaneously combust//

^^Again Very Nice Punchline Dropping Decent Bars!! And Safe Multies In There Also!!

Vote: Triple_N

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