this is a no-brainer this battle goes to mike without a question he won in every category except for structure...put ya verse into lines not paragraphs its easier to read and could be the difference maker in a close battle....nice opener and the next couple bars after that were hott u fell off for a second then ended it with the nice closer..as for LC.....NO COMMENT!!!

vote : mike

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